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Truely graceful..Then hectic.

It's quite amazing. Although I don't like the simple form of rhythm you went for.. You could of added so much more detail. Especially around 1:00 and so forth. The beginning was my favorite, like an enchanted responsibility we are inevitably going to undertake. The gates of our true reflections are to be closed up, before ''they'' reign within to discriminate all levels of good and evil. A war against quitters and fighters. I can imagine the stilla ir innocently overwhlemed slowly fading away, as I turn around to see the red clouds strolling in silently, full of evil intentions. Shadows of wrong, and unstable judgement slowly approaching.. 5/5 10/10 (I really didn't like the hiphop you went for, you should remix this bit.)
- Empyreal Vis -

Wow..

Beautiful acoustic. The rhythm is just boundless, and full of energy. Although I am a bit curious why one of the plucks sounded a bit off.. That being said, wonderful music nonetheless. Continue, you will soon become undoubtably good. 10/10 5/5
Now.. It's story time..

A path before me, shrouded by darkness. Where do I go? Spinning around seeing no light, hint of existence. I sit, overwhelmed by my power, and fortitude to keep going. How can one proceed without anywhere to go? I must deliver an answer to this empty world around me, but how.. Take a step of bravery, another step for perserverence. White glows illuminate the underside of my foot, what could this be? Are my actions, and forward steps causing me to coverup what was hidden by my lack of will to go on? Has my ability to get back up on my feet, allow me to reveal what was around me the entire time. Erasing the darkness around me, I walk as if I was taking a morning frescade. Slowly revealing the place I was locked up in. Where am I? What could this place possibly be? A moon on the right side, and the sun on the left side with their luminous incoherent whispers illuminating the rest of the way. A path glowing white, snaking through the world that was being revealed. What could this mean? The sun and the moon are a another idea of one's perspective. Being the right eye resembles the moon, as for the sun resembles the left eye. I stand motionless now, on a pedestal that seems to be towering over a pit of blue, nothing else.. I sit down casually thinking, wondering what could this all mean. The only way to figure out what lies on the end of this glowing white path stretching miles away to this tower with the sun and the moon acting as guardians on each side..
- Empyreal Vis -

CRF250 responds:

:D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow..This opinion of people you had..?

I wish to hear more, and what you saw within these people before us. If you'd like, we can talk via PM. You sound like someone I would enjoy speaking to. Please, refrain from being overly offended that I wish to dwell in your past, it's matter of curiosity really. Because, I for one love to compose music, write, draw art. I only have one friend, and had to let go of a few friends in my past. So maybe this relative nature draws me to my question of your perspective? Mhmm.. Now.
As for the song, I really like it. You can feel the fury, and vigor you put into this song. this was from your heart, I am very sure of it. When it comes to music, you can hear the faint echoes of the creator's world within every note. Music is truely a very hard language to read, you can't read it.. You feel it.. It's in your veins, your spirit, it cradles your soul. Carresses your mind's mindfield of doubt, cleans up all mist, and fog. It can alternate any moment of thought in a nanosecond. Music is truely a powerful structure of life. Sadly, I cannot compose music right now. I don't have a music program.. :/ I made my music on this pathetic program yet decent program known as MPC, MarioPaint Composer.
Who knows, maybe I will become another great music artist in the future on Newgrounds when I obtain this program in a million years from now. Lol. Atleast I can write, the essence of disembodied truth is what keeps me going, and fighting for the talent I was given. You should, never ignore a talent. It's like a parent ignoring their child. That slight frame of neglectance, will probably make them do something in the near future, when if you did give them the attention they wanted they wouldn't choose such a bad action to do. See my point? Ignoring your talent is like dismembering your reflection. Inspiration is a predetermined response in life to keep you on your path, being lazy will only hide your tracks, and you eventually get lost, having to figure out where to go. Which actually, you are enclosed by the dust of irrepairable mistakes, then you are free to soon realize that you have to create new beginnings, finding sand covered tracks is like finding a needle in a haystack as big as this world.. So, please continue, and never give up. ^^ I like your music. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

GameBalance responds:

Most of my music reflects me.
This track is kinda emotional and sort of sad and same time epic for me.
I not mind to talk on IM

Piano is nice, yes it's nice.

Brilliant. Can't find anything to pick on in this song as dreadful, misplaced, skewered, horrible, etc. It's truely a beautiful peace, like sitting by a pond staring at the night sky, believing, and fighting for who you were born to be. As yourself, as a born warrior to fight all other's uneeded comments on your profile, because needless to say, they have nothing more better to say about themselves. Thinking, of the valiant whispers of your past is a prominent feature in this song. Please, make more soothing music. 5/5 10/10
-EmpyrealVis-

Piano on steroids.

Very powerful piano you got there buddy. I really like the lining of your notes, and the idea you were approaching head on. Please, I beg of you to not kill this piece with a rock song. You doing that is like how babies are so pure and uncorrupted by life's breathing ass of despair, then they want to change what they don't need to change throughout their evolving years.. Because of people can't stop ridiculing the ever imperfected world we have. They can't simply accept the ugly things, the things they dislike as for themselves, so they contradict others, and make them plea for mercy in their mind's agendas..
So, that being said. Great song, DONT FUCKING ALTERNATE IT. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

METALkiDofEArTH08 responds:

I don't have true lyrics to this yet, but I think you just inspired me to write some, and finish this piece.

It's hard though because... I gotta figure out what to do with this and NOT screw it over.

Your songs are like tides.

Flowing well, with the occasional rougher currents within it, still conveying it's beautiful picture. You really know your glitch, and should never stop composing music. I for one have came to a conclusion though ^^ You know how you are so complex? Always speaking through riddles? I used to do that, but I have realized something, good sir. "Words are mere communication, truth is an encoded message" Meaning, that words were ment for us to communicate with each other, when it comes to truth, it is based off your mind's essence, not one's education. If a particular individual doesn't understand it, so be it. The subconscious will most definately pick it up, which is the idea I wish to bare close to me. Can complexity be a new way of showing people the enlightened form of life? Truth has been buried by alot of wannabes, no faces, quitters, liars, dreaders,siphoners,destroyers,stealer s,etc. So speaking in an archaic sense might distribute our keen senses through an abnormal form of connection between the traces we leave behind for every word we speak from our heart. I hope you know by now, that yes. I am AphoticNoumenon, and yes. I changed my name even more. Just though I would comment on yet another great song that makes you ''think'' regardless of all the noises it creates. Keep composing music my good friend, you truely open the deep side of me more and more, every song is knocking all the tiny aspects of the real me I hid long ago, due to a harsh childhood. I wish you great luck, and prosper energy to help you keep going. I will always admire your songs as the elements of a key to my safe.
5/5 10/10 Until then, farewell.
- Empyreal Vis -

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

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Echoes of Prosperity.

Mhmm.. An interesting track. I really like it's uptight, energy bringing, heart caressing, life filling, soul touching feel it conveys. A light song, extremely light. A feather would be a word to explain it. Light as a feather, as of the touch of truth. It's quite enlighteneing, and compresses all negative thoughts into a box. Then, when the piano comes in, it starts erasing this box into nothing, only a box containing purity, and whispers of the light. Great to hear someone that creates the angelic feature of music. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

djInTheDark responds:

Thats going in the archive. Probably one of the best music descriptions I have ever heard. It makes me very happy to know that I created something that someone could so beautifully put words to.

Thank you.

Bliss.

Remarkable synths. Great flow, and invigoration. I will display what this music makes me see, as should everyone else. Our minds are a great world.
The street lights passing by 1 by 1 like fireflies, staring out into the abyss beckoning me to open the car door to fall out. Bliss, entangling us into a spaced out autopilot. Listening, and perfectly limber for it's every action it wishes to bring upon us. Zombie like structure takes over our dreaded thoughts, as the sound of bliss rocks us in it's arms. Eyes closing. Ears being siezing all outside forms of sound. One mind, one place. Is true grace.
5/5 10/10 Need I say more..?

-EmpyrealVis-

tehpirateguy responds:

Thanks for the review, and I must say your description was quite vivid. I especially like "beckoning me to open the car door to fall out." , almost like you'd be falling out of the very point in space and time and history to float through the endless worlds that could have been.

I love to hear what people visualize and think while listening to my music, partly because most of my music comes from things that I visualize and feel.

I wish you could rate reviews because I would give yours a 10.

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