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[[DJ_ITD] - Feel Real?]

I Love The Song Name

Ahh..Life. The primal essence of our health, and growth capacity, may it be physical,
or mental. It whispers to us, never reassuring to our doubts we have of it,only to embrace the blueprints,
of hope we command ourselves to lead with. We diligently enlighten ourselves, as the days pass us by like cars
as we walk down long, stretching roads. Contemplating on the minor complaints we all so happily carry, not through purposeful agendas,
but merely through the great wall of emotions we all bare. Emotions, can be light as a feather, while at other times it could become heavier
than a 60K weight. It boundlessly tempts us to do insane actions, causing our eyes, mind, and soul to completely
hit the lockdown button. Sometimes, you can't get out of it without another's perspective, and true insight.
When one is blinded by their own strength and might, it could prevent them from even moving. Not physically
of course, but the mind's honorable order we all should go by. Our ego, is possibly a great subject to relate to a bomb.
If you don't stop it, it just becomes bigger and bigger, aswell as having the fuse slowly shorten through time.
Not only that, this bomb is only to be defused vicariously, by the time it explodes continuously in the matter of seconds,
is the time your eyes have been eclipsed from valor's echoes. So if you, or anyone you think has an inflated ego, I would
indoubtably, indubatably, surely, inevitably stop them before it is too late. Paying attention to your
surroundings in life is one thing, paying attention to the silouettes of our surroundings is another.
Frankly, I am highly discontent of our frivolous perspectives in life. Everybody's views of things are so different,
not in a great way either. It's making earth's life the biggest trench in the entire universe. Our minds, are broken.
Our opinions are just another weapon of destruction, our eyes of deceit is just exponetially decreasing the
innocence left in this world. People are feeble, those who are innocent are the one's who deserve to obtain such
important stages in life. Such as jobs ; families ; careers. If you allow these zombies, and just corrupted imbeciles rise above,
they will influence the rest of the world. You see, us humans. We work in a very complex pattern. We psychologically impair our
imperfect ways, because when we see people higher than us, we quickly judge under our skin. Them, aswell for us. These girls who watch TV,
thinking these women are SO much beautiful than they are. It's simply an incompetent way of living. How can you misjudge yourself? You were
not born to hide yourselves under heavier lies. Why live as a fake? Is it even living? People need to stop hiding their faces..
I rather speak to your reflection, than your mask's advocate. Just think about it. People, who work day in, and day out to their last breath
can get the same job as a couch potato, who is utterly arrogant, with no sense of respect for anybody, even their selfbeing. Tell me that
does not piss you off to any point. If it doesn't, you are simply one of them, or you are just not human. No matter how patient you can be
these people rise without anything to give, while those who fall can give all they've got. This world, lives under a red sky. It mortally,
descretely speaking in it's primal bellows of despair. Us people, our union. It forms this world. The surroundings, and atmospheres doesn't
make this world, a world. People do. Only in a predetermined sense. What we are doing right now it's just downright dreadful. You know whats
harder than facing near death experience? Being innocent. Here, I will elaborate what potential derives from the greatest challenge in life.
1.You cannot do anything wrong.2.You cannot lie, you can't hide.3.You are to be strong, and honorable.4.Can't create any type of difference in yourself.
5.You have to fight against billions of people.6.Not only do you have to fight, and stand for your rightousness. You have to bare the pains in
your chest through all the cries of people's helplessness.. :/

djInTheDark responds:

0.0

Not much to say to that.

Or that, or that...

[[DJ_ITD] - Reality?]

WTF at 1:30

That was wow. Caught me off guard. I was just about to write a review, and say ADD A SYNTH. Then you did add a beautiful synth. I really admired that. It was amazing. This is one of those songs that I don't want to hear ANYONE relate it to their actions of drug using. It's slightly pathetic to hear people compare music with weed, cocaine, smoking. It's so annoying. Music is beautiful it's the vibrant echoes of our soul. Smoking is black coal that babysits our lungs. Weed is a undefinable judgement of rightousness, so why even take the chance to even beleive it's natural? It makes us into zombies. My friend became one, not the same he was before before weed. Now, all other drugs, you should just be ashame dof yourselves to even try it. I know people are like ''You should try everything'' Well, this is when common sense steps in. IT IS HUMAN MADE, PEOPLE DIE FROM IT. Ok. Rant finished. Now, you know what I see when I hearcieve this song's image? I see a blue ocean rolling in, as the sun slowly goes down. Around me an opposite picture of life reveals itself. It was darkness, but you know what was nice about it? It wasn't evil, it was just a mellow side of light. Nothing more but a shade of colouring. It exerts no such thing of evil. Why do people fear darkness? It's beyond me. Some things only show up during the night. I can stare at the moon for hours, contemplating on life's structure. I woudl stare at the sun too, but it's mean and rapes my eye's retina. Wouldn't you guys look too? How can you not stare at nature's beautiful art it has created? (Also, for those who have no idea how to rate. Rate my review for it is helpful when I talk about the song, not on my opinions of drugs.. That isn't very smart.) 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis -

djInTheDark responds:

Another outstanding review. I can't agree with you more on that topic, especially because of the school I go to with a new giant problem every day, enoughs enough. Thank you so much for your incite, your reviews are invaluable.

[Ernie Page III - Heaven]

Wow..

Beautiful acoustic. The rhythm is just boundless, and full of energy. Although I am a bit curious why one of the plucks sounded a bit off.. That being said, wonderful music nonetheless. Continue, you will soon become undoubtably good. 10/10 5/5
Now.. It's story time..

A path before me, shrouded by darkness. Where do I go? Spinning around seeing no light, hint of existence. I sit, overwhelmed by my power, and fortitude to keep going. How can one proceed without anywhere to go? I must deliver an answer to this empty world around me, but how.. Take a step of bravery, another step for perserverence. White glows illuminate the underside of my foot, what could this be? Are my actions, and forward steps causing me to coverup what was hidden by my lack of will to go on? Has my ability to get back up on my feet, allow me to reveal what was around me the entire time. Erasing the darkness around me, I walk as if I was taking a morning frescade. Slowly revealing the place I was locked up in. Where am I? What could this place possibly be? A moon on the right side, and the sun on the left side with their luminous incoherent whispers illuminating the rest of the way. A path glowing white, snaking through the world that was being revealed. What could this mean? The sun and the moon are a another idea of one's perspective. Being the right eye resembles the moon, as for the sun resembles the left eye. I stand motionless now, on a pedestal that seems to be towering over a pit of blue, nothing else.. I sit down casually thinking, wondering what could this all mean. The only way to figure out what lies on the end of this glowing white path stretching miles away to this tower with the sun and the moon acting as guardians on each side..
- Empyreal Vis -

CRF250 responds:

:D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Sao Ashek Zun]

Wow..This opinion of people you had..?

I wish to hear more, and what you saw within these people before us. If you'd like, we can talk via PM. You sound like someone I would enjoy speaking to. Please, refrain from being overly offended that I wish to dwell in your past, it's matter of curiosity really. Because, I for one love to compose music, write, draw art. I only have one friend, and had to let go of a few friends in my past. So maybe this relative nature draws me to my question of your perspective? Mhmm.. Now.
As for the song, I really like it. You can feel the fury, and vigor you put into this song. this was from your heart, I am very sure of it. When it comes to music, you can hear the faint echoes of the creator's world within every note. Music is truely a very hard language to read, you can't read it.. You feel it.. It's in your veins, your spirit, it cradles your soul. Carresses your mind's mindfield of doubt, cleans up all mist, and fog. It can alternate any moment of thought in a nanosecond. Music is truely a powerful structure of life. Sadly, I cannot compose music right now. I don't have a music program.. :/ I made my music on this pathetic program yet decent program known as MPC, MarioPaint Composer.
Who knows, maybe I will become another great music artist in the future on Newgrounds when I obtain this program in a million years from now. Lol. Atleast I can write, the essence of disembodied truth is what keeps me going, and fighting for the talent I was given. You should, never ignore a talent. It's like a parent ignoring their child. That slight frame of neglectance, will probably make them do something in the near future, when if you did give them the attention they wanted they wouldn't choose such a bad action to do. See my point? Ignoring your talent is like dismembering your reflection. Inspiration is a predetermined response in life to keep you on your path, being lazy will only hide your tracks, and you eventually get lost, having to figure out where to go. Which actually, you are enclosed by the dust of irrepairable mistakes, then you are free to soon realize that you have to create new beginnings, finding sand covered tracks is like finding a needle in a haystack as big as this world.. So, please continue, and never give up. ^^ I like your music. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

GameBalance responds:

Most of my music reflects me.
This track is kinda emotional and sort of sad and same time epic for me.
I not mind to talk on IM

[Genesis ~AFA~]

Piano on steroids.

Very powerful piano you got there buddy. I really like the lining of your notes, and the idea you were approaching head on. Please, I beg of you to not kill this piece with a rock song. You doing that is like how babies are so pure and uncorrupted by life's breathing ass of despair, then they want to change what they don't need to change throughout their evolving years.. Because of people can't stop ridiculing the ever imperfected world we have. They can't simply accept the ugly things, the things they dislike as for themselves, so they contradict others, and make them plea for mercy in their mind's agendas..
So, that being said. Great song, DONT FUCKING ALTERNATE IT. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

METALkiDofEArTH08 responds:

I don't have true lyrics to this yet, but I think you just inspired me to write some, and finish this piece.

It's hard though because... I gotta figure out what to do with this and NOT screw it over.

[Passenger-side Daydream]

Your songs are like tides.

Flowing well, with the occasional rougher currents within it, still conveying it's beautiful picture. You really know your glitch, and should never stop composing music. I for one have came to a conclusion though ^^ You know how you are so complex? Always speaking through riddles? I used to do that, but I have realized something, good sir. "Words are mere communication, truth is an encoded message" Meaning, that words were ment for us to communicate with each other, when it comes to truth, it is based off your mind's essence, not one's education. If a particular individual doesn't understand it, so be it. The subconscious will most definately pick it up, which is the idea I wish to bare close to me. Can complexity be a new way of showing people the enlightened form of life? Truth has been buried by alot of wannabes, no faces, quitters, liars, dreaders,siphoners,destroyers,stealer s,etc. So speaking in an archaic sense might distribute our keen senses through an abnormal form of connection between the traces we leave behind for every word we speak from our heart. I hope you know by now, that yes. I am AphoticNoumenon, and yes. I changed my name even more. Just though I would comment on yet another great song that makes you ''think'' regardless of all the noises it creates. Keep composing music my good friend, you truely open the deep side of me more and more, every song is knocking all the tiny aspects of the real me I hid long ago, due to a harsh childhood. I wish you great luck, and prosper energy to help you keep going. I will always admire your songs as the elements of a key to my safe.
5/5 10/10 Until then, farewell.
- Empyreal Vis -

LLAAPPSSEE responds:

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[[DJ_ITD] - Promised Land (D&P)]

Echoes of Prosperity.

Mhmm.. An interesting track. I really like it's uptight, energy bringing, heart caressing, life filling, soul touching feel it conveys. A light song, extremely light. A feather would be a word to explain it. Light as a feather, as of the touch of truth. It's quite enlighteneing, and compresses all negative thoughts into a box. Then, when the piano comes in, it starts erasing this box into nothing, only a box containing purity, and whispers of the light. Great to hear someone that creates the angelic feature of music. 5/5 10/10
- Empyreal Vis-

djInTheDark responds:

Thats going in the archive. Probably one of the best music descriptions I have ever heard. It makes me very happy to know that I created something that someone could so beautifully put words to.

Thank you.